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Last Post 09/09/2010 6:43 AM by  BrianSweeney
O Bard thy Heart Streams Forth
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Ronald and Dwinn
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09/09/2010 12:42 AM
    HOMEWORK FOR WEEKS 5 and 6 (September 12 and 19, 2010)

    * O Bard thy Heart Streams Forth

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    O Bard thy heart streams forth

    O Bard thy heart streams forth this age in thrust
    And pours forth shafts of Light for dawning day!
    With magic cloak and wand in hand you must,
    As Prospero, employ your magic ray.

    O Francis shake your living spear of Truth
    And to your highest love, Sophia, hear,
    In mirth and sighs, goodbyes, the plays of youth,
    The parts, the place and time, the chosen year.

    When Nature's drama, Tempest, starts the scene
    And souls caught up in Light with innocent sight,
    And highest forms of everyday life we gleam,
    O wherefrom comes this wonder stream delight?

    What state to hold, what beauty fair and living!
    Please come and note, this door is named forgiving!

    Ronald Dubrawsky
    BrianSweeney
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    09/09/2010 6:43 AM
    Ronald,

    This is a A wow and solid A.

    ab ab
    cd cd
    ef ef
    gg Perfect.

    10 syllables in all lines, except the last two. A little tweak will get you there and then a solid A+.

    Excellent work!

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